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Must speak
In words easier left unwritten.
Watching from a cold seat
Through the windows of an unstoppable train
--of events--
That rest upon shoulders
Like the greg sludge
In an artic night sky.
Even within an Imagination
More vast, a bloody comprehension
May an initiative be seen
When moving mountains.
There shall never be a relation
Between two bare feet
Standing at a crest so bitter
--loneliness, arrogance, and pride--
I may need you.
But do I want you?
In words easier left unwritten.
Watching from a cold seat
Through the windows of an unstoppable train
--of events--
That rest upon shoulders
Like the greg sludge
In an artic night sky.
Even within an Imagination
More vast, a bloody comprehension
May an initiative be seen
When moving mountains.
There shall never be a relation
Between two bare feet
Standing at a crest so bitter
--loneliness, arrogance, and pride--
I may need you.
But do I want you?
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"Like the greg sludge/in an artic night sky." Did you happen to mean GRAY and ARCTIC?
I LOVE this, overall. Fantastic imagery. The last six lines gave me shivers. Great work!
I LOVE this, overall. Fantastic imagery. The last six lines gave me shivers. Great work!