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She"I'm not entirely sure if this is right?"
"What do you mean?"
"The bolt should have went in the other way."
"No, you have it in the right way."
"But wouldn't it be more probed to fall out due to gravity?"
"Not if you tighten it."
"Well, I'm turning it around anyways."
"You know that's why she left."
"That's not why she left."
"Yes, yes it is. You cannot accept criticism."
"I can handle criticism. And criticism has nothing to do with this bolt."
"No. It doesn't. It doesn't directly. But you cannot accept that you had the bolt right the first time."
"The bolt has nothing to do with her."
"Maybe it does?"
"--Then maybe you should explain it to me."
"Maybe you had the bolt wrong to begin with."
"So, I was right--"
"--And that's why she left."
WindI'm removing this because I'll be submitting this to publishers and agents within the next six months. Thanks for everyone who kept up with the story, and a special thanks to everyone who slid me a comment! Please pray for me! I need them.
That little spec of dust,
Laying in the back of mind
Once a statue to rust
She was eaten away by time.
Her arms reach
Her body waves
Chiseled to teach
So many early graves.
And that little spec of dirt
Will never again be one
What others took had once hurt,
But there's no longer a demolition.
Invisible hands pull it near,
As a fire may turn to glass.
The spec is now so clear,
But more fragile to pass.
Keep it if one will,
And never let it go.
Several shards may heal
A life that was once unreal.
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Bluefley has a gallery filled with artwork that whisks you off in to a Sci-fi daydream, and keeps you captivated for hours. Marc has been a member of our community for over a decade and has achieved nothing but success with his astounding commitment to interacting with the community, sharing a prolific amount of video tutorials and generally being an all round rockstar deviant. It is no joke that we are absolutely delighted to award the Deviousness Award for April 2014 to ... Read More