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LET

Something break

US

Apart from nature's wonders.

RUN

To an unforgivable place

ON

The brink of extinction.

AN

Undeniable series of events,

INFINITE

Thrills leading us on this devastating

JOURNEY

To a new world.
:iconeveresshiawind:
I decided to write something a bit more fixed this time around. Just be sure to read the words in all CAPS. Thanks for viewing! :)
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:iconblakecurran:
Mood: Love *BlakeCurran Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
Very cool!
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:iconeveresshiawind:
*EveresshiaWind Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks man! (And for all the favorites!) :D
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:iconblakecurran:
*BlakeCurran Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
My pleasure :)
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:iconsory4lovin-you:
This is brilliant, i really love stuff like this
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:iconeveresshiawind:
*EveresshiaWind Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! It's my first "hidden message" poem.
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:iconaustori:
love it!! :-D
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:iconeveresshiawind:
*EveresshiaWind Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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:icongabrielignitus:
~gabrielIgnitus Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you know, reinassance poets used the last words of their verses to hide messages...
It's amazing the level of understanding society has decreased. Even in a site for art, people needs to write in capital leters to "hide" a messsage...
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*EveresshiaWind Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It'd never come across if I didn't specifically point it out. Lol
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:icongabrielignitus:
~gabrielIgnitus Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that's the problem! people wants to have their food already chewed! It's not your fault as an artist for responding to a demand, but society itself! They look for the easy way out, the one with less effort!
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